The animation quality was quite good, only a few things i can really suggest, moar shadows! well, that might be asking for a bit much, but if you had a lot more shadows to your characters that would make things look a hell of a lot nicer, well it looks nice already, but more attention to detail can make nice into epic. This is pretty damn good for an animation i can say, but there is room for improvement, look forward to seeing improvement and future episodes. :3
Okay, im not sure what to give this, because im doubtfull as to whether or not all of this was made by you, i mean the story might have been, but the only thing im coming across is the use of sprites like the one in this movie.. Have these sprites been created by you or did you use them as a template from somewhere else? If they were i'd be impressed but im doubtfull as to the possibility of that, the story overall was too short, would have been better if the movie itself was a lot longer, and if these were template sprites i don't think that would have been too hard to do, as for making them that would be a different story. Anywho, i'll give this a 4 because the story wasn't that great as it lacked in lengh, if you added more lengh you could have done a lot more in it, it's just a little too short for an episode, i mean you could have something that short and make it sufficient, but this lacked any real story other than an introduction as to the peoples names and that the guy was at school. I also gave a 4 because i doubt that you have created these sprites, if you have created them then i would consider a 7 for your efforts, but for now it will remain a 4, This has potential, the music was alright, the backgrounds could have been better, but right now it just looks like a Habbo site chat room or something.
I made the sprites on Banned Story, i downloaded it before i made this.
could be better
the joke here was hardly funny in my opinion, could have been better if the images were drawn better, if this were all keyframed and drawn over again and again i might have been impressed, there is a lot more that could have been done with and i am thoroughly dissappointed.
if you have any tips please tell me. that is why i posted this, for feedback.
I'll look over the fact that this is completely unoriginal, this kind of game is now used as training for novice programmers, well that's what i am assuming is why you made it. The gameplay matches that of the original, plus the function of extra lives and upgrades which is nice, it was nicely drawn, but a little more could have been done, with the spaceship in particular, especially with that ominous red ball that shot fireballs for some reason, didn't know what it was. Well anywho the graphics were nice, gameplay was alright considering the game itself, music was lackluster, but at least it was something, and it was good to not have something so loud it pierced my ear drums. All in all i would say that you made yourself a decent asteroids game, only other comments i will make is that after i learnt that i could easily win by spinning in circles and holding the fire button there was no point to it, i mean i'd die every now and then but i'd accumulate so many more lives it didn't matter, got up to level 35 because i wanted to see myself explode into a pretty ball of fire. And at that note, i would just like to say that those planets move extraordinaryily fast at those levels.. kinda freaks me out, and makes me worry for the poor little critters that may or may not be living there. Anywho, i better rap this up then, you have done a good job, i'm only really doing nitpicking here, the game functions well and there doesn't seem to be any bugs, except maybe possibly the rate i can fire by holding the space bar down, im unsure as to whether that was intentional or not, but take what you want into consideration, hope some of this helps, if not then... ha, you just read through this whole block of writing for nothing :P Sandwich out
Thank you for a very very good and long review. The red ball was originally gray and it was easier to see that it was suppose to be a UFO like in the original. I turned it red because I thought it would look nicer, but I agree. I shall update that detail.
I could have programmed the missiles to fire with 5-10 px distance, but I like rapid firing of personal choice, but I will think about it.
Thank you again :)
Could be better
The art quality is alright, the music is a little repetitive over time, and there should be a lot more than just popping ballons, maybe a time limit to see how many you could pop would be good, if this is a work in progress you have a while to go i think, but it looks alright, again the art is good, the music could be better and there is more needed in terms of gameplay
The game appears to be incomplete, after the first level is just stops and there is nothing else you can do. i might be mistaken and that it might be just me, but i don't think it works. However it is an interesting concept with the shortened sight and it has potential, maybe a lot more levels with some eerie music and some monsters it just might work. But for now it is incomplete and unsatisfactory
Actually no you can play the second level by pressing exactly on the letters. once it says level 3, that's the end of the demo. there are monsters, and I will continue it and there will be eerie music. so ya, thanks for the comment though I'm glad you like it so far.
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