The animation quality was quite good, only a few things i can really suggest, moar shadows! well, that might be asking for a bit much, but if you had a lot more shadows to your characters that would make things look a hell of a lot nicer, well it looks nice already, but more attention to detail can make nice into epic. This is pretty damn good for an animation i can say, but there is room for improvement, look forward to seeing improvement and future episodes. :3
Okay, im not sure what to give this, because im doubtfull as to whether or not all of this was made by you, i mean the story might have been, but the only thing im coming across is the use of sprites like the one in this movie.. Have these sprites been created by you or did you use them as a template from somewhere else? If they were i'd be impressed but im doubtfull as to the possibility of that, the story overall was too short, would have been better if the movie itself was a lot longer, and if these were template sprites i don't think that would have been too hard to do, as for making them that would be a different story. Anywho, i'll give this a 4 because the story wasn't that great as it lacked in lengh, if you added more lengh you could have done a lot more in it, it's just a little too short for an episode, i mean you could have something that short and make it sufficient, but this lacked any real story other than an introduction as to the peoples names and that the guy was at school. I also gave a 4 because i doubt that you have created these sprites, if you have created them then i would consider a 7 for your efforts, but for now it will remain a 4, This has potential, the music was alright, the backgrounds could have been better, but right now it just looks like a Habbo site chat room or something.
I made the sprites on Banned Story, i downloaded it before i made this.
could be better
the joke here was hardly funny in my opinion, could have been better if the images were drawn better, if this were all keyframed and drawn over again and again i might have been impressed, there is a lot more that could have been done with and i am thoroughly dissappointed.
if you have any tips please tell me. that is why i posted this, for feedback.
i might have some advice..
well it seems the major problem is the sync, what you need to do is drag out the sounds further along, just because it syncs on the FLA file doesn't mean it will on the SWF file... sounds stupid i know but it happens, i really think that adobe needs to find some way to fix this problem because it gets really annoying sometimes, i rated 0 before from you're request ^^; but i would have given it a 3, if it synced then a 4, the idea is good, you just need to fix it up a little
also, cant you just delete the file if it isn't working on NG and even then you could just as easily fix the file by editing the animation then editing your submission and then adding the new improved file rather than hoping it would get blammed so you can post a new one, hope that helps out for you
despite the fact this was a stick figure animation and it was your first time it was done quite well, would be better with sound i have to admit and i would also suggest making the stick figures a little skinnier next time as their limbs were a bit hard to make out, hope you do more good stuff like this and strive to get better :3
thx ill keep tht in mind
this is good
i liked the animation, it was pretty decent, good potential, the doctor kinda appeared out of nowhere, but i suppose ya had the right to throw a grenade at him assuming he just popped out of nowhere in the middle of the street asking to check for anal disease xDDD
not sure what the original is like but i think you might have made a large improvement, leave it for a couple of years than make another remake just to see the improvement :P good exorcise that it keep up the good work :3
if you wana see the original just check my flash submissions and youll find
this was a good animation! im not sure how much you spent on it but it could of had a lot more potential to it, like stuff happening in the background more rather than a simple change of colour, but otherwise i really enjoyed it :3 despite the fact it was one of the many songs i hated due to my mother playing it repeatedly on the radio T_T
i love this, give exactly what the people suggest xD hopefully the same guy will come back and make a comment on it XD *fingers crossed* im giving it a seven just for the idea xD
i would have possibly done more work rather than drawing over photographs at least, like drawing the entire body, not sure how you would have done that as im not sure about your level of skill. but still the music along with the animation made me laugh xD
it was okay
Well that wasn't what i was expecting, but random, but hey, randoms good :P
as for the few seconds lost it may be possible you uploaded an old version of the animation? i have done that before, you think that you have everything right only to have some part that you added in before disappear. well i hope that you'll somehow figure that issue out. Keep up the good work
Just what I needed to hear! "keep up the good work" . thanks means a lot. there are many more to come.
This is a very good movie, i like the style of the animation you decided to make. The bubble speeches were ok, but it all worked out quite well :) Hope you make more, your work is good.
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