Sandwich91's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kizunai Ep.1]

hmm..

Okay, im not sure what to give this, because im doubtfull as to whether or not all of this was made by you, i mean the story might have been, but the only thing im coming across is the use of sprites like the one in this movie.. Have these sprites been created by you or did you use them as a template from somewhere else? If they were i'd be impressed but im doubtfull as to the possibility of that, the story overall was too short, would have been better if the movie itself was a lot longer, and if these were template sprites i don't think that would have been too hard to do, as for making them that would be a different story. Anywho, i'll give this a 4 because the story wasn't that great as it lacked in lengh, if you added more lengh you could have done a lot more in it, it's just a little too short for an episode, i mean you could have something that short and make it sufficient, but this lacked any real story other than an introduction as to the peoples names and that the guy was at school. I also gave a 4 because i doubt that you have created these sprites, if you have created them then i would consider a 7 for your efforts, but for now it will remain a 4, This has potential, the music was alright, the backgrounds could have been better, but right now it just looks like a Habbo site chat room or something.

OrangeXrush responds:

I made the sprites on Banned Story, i downloaded it before i made this.

[Blackvsblue]

good

despite the fact this was a stick figure animation and it was your first time it was done quite well, would be better with sound i have to admit and i would also suggest making the stick figures a little skinnier next time as their limbs were a bit hard to make out, hope you do more good stuff like this and strive to get better :3

Uberwsonicman responds:

thx ill keep tht in mind

[The after life]

it was okay

Well that wasn't what i was expecting, but random, but hey, randoms good :P

as for the few seconds lost it may be possible you uploaded an old version of the animation? i have done that before, you think that you have everything right only to have some part that you added in before disappear. well i hope that you'll somehow figure that issue out. Keep up the good work

Monkeysystem responds:

Just what I needed to hear! "keep up the good work" . thanks means a lot. there are many more to come.

[Luigi's Birthday remake]

it's okay, could be better

Well, it was okay, if there was a joke in there it wasn't all that funny.
Good animation though, i can see how you tried to make it look like the actual games of mario, im not sure about your skill level in drawing, but maybe it would pay to draw mario and luigi yourself. But if you're not that skilled maybe you could be a little more careful with cutting out the sprites, i saw some white edges on the images which made look a bit dodgy

other than that you did well, the storyline is good and im sure with practice you can improve, goes to show that not all animations need violence or sex to be interesting

thegameboy2008 responds:

I'm no good at flash art